wow! very promising!
that looks very interesting! i take it it's a trailer of some sort. i only wrote because of the drawing - while they are very good, generally, you do need some help with your anatomy and perspective. try either
http://www.howtodrawmanga.com/ - for great tutorials, and also buying books (which are fairly great as well).
and also -
http://vcl.ctrl-c.liu.se/vcl/index.html
so you can get comments in the forum section. (it IS furry art, but theyre great :) )
looking promising!
P.S. i dont think this is promoting other web sites, right? im not promoting shit, im trying to help <:(